Thank you Crystal for your comments
Thank you Crystal for your comments, suggestions, and editing my admission essays!! You have helped me smooth the flow, ensure nice clarity, strengthen word choices, and added more details for good finality. Especially, you did great jobs in heavy edits to help me get under the word count while ensuring my overall intended meaning. I also much appreciate your quick help (several times) when I requested short turnarounds :) You are truly an expert! With your help, my application experience was much easier and I am now much more confident submitting the edited versions. I would have struggled a lot without your help! I hope you will be able to help me in the future as well. I was very pleasant working with you! Thank you! I hope you have a fantastic day!