I appreciate you giving it another go... good try... but no.
I appreciate you giving it another go. But the second version was only a small improvement over the first. Honestly, if I had been able to speak with one of your artistic representatives and they had told me that the requests I made (other than making the image more pronounced... which in the second version it is a bit), I would have had you not bother to make the second version. We could have both saved time. And, yes, I would have asked for some level of reimbursement. You get two stars for making an effort, not for the completed project. I won't be using your services again, but I do appreciate that your customer service representative made a valiant effort to get things corrected.